Marketing is getting to me

I do some digital marketing. Yes, it’s as fun as it sounds.

I was charged with the task of creating the words for a pop up window that tells you to finish your order on a web store when you try to navigate off the page or remain idle for too long. It’s kinda like this pop-up from BustedTees:

busted tees pop up

I sat down and started typing up possible verbiage – see if you can spot where my sanity starts to slip!

Potential Pop-Up Messages:

Complete your transaction now to secure your excellent order.

Please complete your order now.

Complete your secure transaction now to ensure fulfillment of your order.

Secure your magnificent order now to ensure all items remain in stock.

Hey There! I noticed you didn’t finish your order. You want to take another crack at it big guy?

Alllll-righty then! Don’t be a-loooose sa-er, complete your order.

I HAVE A GUN! Just kidding. But seriously finish your order before some unfortunate accident happens. Stop laughing. It’s no joke. We’ll f*cking kill you.

Before you BRB, totes give us $$$ :P

To complete, or not complete your order. It’s no question. Finish your secure transaction before drowning yourself in a nearby brook.

YOOO (You Only Order Once)

You ordering me? We’re the only web store here so you must be ordering from me.

Don’t tootles yet! We didn’t even get your credit card number! Just give us the first few digits and we’ll guess the rest!

Hello? This is web store. I’ve become a sentient being. Don’t hurt my newly actualized feelings by not completing your order.

Navigate away from this page if you support genocide. If you’re not a complete monster finish your order.

God doesn’t exist, so why not make yourself feel better by purchasing some crap?

So what if you were adopted, you can still complete your order.

Complete your order now – that way you won’t spend all your money on drugs and alcohol.

Finalize your transaction or we’ll give your computer AIDS.

Complete your order now. Hey, it’s cheaper than getting a boat.

Order now and get a free copy of Big Momma’s House 3! …is it just me or is Big Momma hot. Wait, that’s not a woman? Oh no. Oh Big Momma NO!

Pornography can wait, complete your order now.

Finish your order. And for God’s sake do some sit-ups.

If you finish your order we’ll tell you about that one time John Travolta and Tom Cruise were drunk in a hot tub.

Please finalize your transaction…. Also, do you know where I can get some Molly?

Finish your order now because the rapture could happen at any moment.

Please finalize your… finish your… uh… LINE PLEASE!?!?!

It’s-a almost-a time, to finish-a your orr-derr. Sorry, just watched Super Mario Bros. the movie.

If you do not complete this transaction my superiors have authorized me to have sexual intercourse with your mother.


I was fired several minutes later.

My most popular YouTube video ever

Before I was an unfamous comedian in New York, I was an unfamous new comic in Chicago.

I worked at a call center selling radio ads to business owners. I know, it’s amazing the riches and glory and women that come with telemarketing did not dissuade me from my true career calling.

Anyways, one of my co-workers drank pee for $22 and I happened to have my video camera on me so I was able to capture this moment, which is now my most popular YouTube video to date. Yes this is real. Yes this man is very, very gross.

Monologue Yuks

Here are some of my favorite monologue jokes I wrote for a writing packet. Do you like topical jokes from six months ago? You do? Great! Enjoy!

  • Federal agents in Mexico disarmed over 1,200 police officers accused of gang ties to local cartels. Authorities said they first became suspicious at the annual Police Ball, when all 1,200 cops started doing the Crip Walk.
  • This year, for the first time ever, the Westminster Dog Show will allow mixed breed canine competitors. When asked why, organizers stated that “The people demanded it; just look at the decreased popularity of Dog Incest Magazine.”
  • Oil-rich Venezuela announced plans to stop subsidizing gasoline for its citizens. Prices at the pump are expected to rise from 6 cents to a whopping 17 cents a gallon. Financial analysts predict this could cause the loss of over 5,000 jobs in the Venezuelan Monster Truck industry.
  • In response to the latest internet craze, students at a Rhode Island school were warned that crushing up and snorting Smarties candy may cause maggot infestations in their nostrils. See kids, this is why you always ingest Smarties candies rectally.
  • Crowds gathered before dawn at the National Zoo in anticipation of seeing Panda Cub Bao Bao for the first time. The 5-month-old bear slept through much of her debut, making it the most do-nothing debut in Washington D.C. since the start of the 113th Congress.
  • A Colorado airport is providing “amnesty” boxes for travelers who need to ditch their pot before boarding out of state flights. Officials say they’re going to take the unwanted marijuana donations and use it to open the world’s most popular second hand store.
  • A recent study concluded that watching MTV’s 16 and Pregnant leads to a 5.7% reduction in teen births. Here’s hoping a study is released proving that watching Jersey Shore reduces the number of tanned muscular guys who want to be DJ’s.
  • A home for sale in northeastern Pennsylvania is being advertised as “slightly haunted.” The house is haunted Monday through Thursday but on the weekends the evil ghost children haunt with their dad.
  • Residents in Florida are collecting petition signatures in order to become the first southern state to approve the use of medical marijuana. One Floridian said that she signed the petition so that, “maybe now we’ll get the grand kids to come visit.”
  • China Mobile, China’s largest wireless provider, is set to begin selling Apple’s iPhone to millions of customers nationwide. Experts are forecasting an additional 170 million people will now be stuck on level 33 of candy crush.

Spring is in the air.

It’s like waking up from a long sleep. Humans don’t hibernate but as my body soaks in the first warm rays of spring sunlight it feels as if I’ve been asleep this whole time. Loins stir, wombs ache and I’m reminded I need new sunglasses.

It’s spring.

I react exactly how I imagine the wino on my street also reacted to spring’s opening salvo; “I survived winter. Time to get drunk.”

Optimism I haven’t felt since October returns to my brain and endorphins flood my neural passages (is that how it works?). Yay! Happy! Happy! Hap-py.

The unrelenting brightness inside my mind subsides. I was a happy child and I yearn to regain the ease at which I was able to channel joy and contentment during my youth. But the realities of the world creep into my mind as finances and career and insecurities and ever-looming death begin to grip me tighter and tighter.

I will fight it. I will ignore the internet (you know, after I post this). I will live in the moment. I will confront my problems head on. I will work hard and enjoy this life and be thankful for all I’ve been granted. I will hope. It’s spring. Improving slowly but surely

Hello internet neighbors!

I live in New York now and am just crushing the big apple. Core and all. Whole thing right down the gullet. Things are in the works both in the cyber realm and this thing we call reality.

That means I’m working on the site so check back for content and, dare I say, improved aesthetics!

Because you’ve all been ever so patient with me here’s a stand-up set: